Michigan Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Michigan Investors

United States > Michigan

BSc (Computer Science) MBA Extensive experience as an entrepreneur. Have started companies from startup stage, to international franchising and publicly listed a US based franchise on the Frankfurt Exchange. Extensive experience in B2B and service based industries. Well versed with international business, different cultures and how to build businesses across borders. Dual citizen (Australian, United States). I am looking to be a part of a team to help run and build an established business that does not require "on-site" attendance. I am looking for something that I be involved in remotely. I am willing to travel internationally. So I am looking for active involvement and can also invest.

$20,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

27 years old. Male. Bachelors in Finance. Institutional investment experience - have assisted in investing over $5 billion dollars on behalf of pensions and other investment institutions. Spent several years at investment companies with values in excess of $30 billion dollars - specialties include private equity, venture capital, private real estate, and private credit investments. Experienced in deep financial, fundamental, and technical analysis of investment opportunities. Have experience starting a business services company from scratch that has generated over $350k in annual revenue in the first 10 months of business. Prior institutional investor, no investment license currently active. Anticipated Involvement: Silent investor that requires frequent business updates.

$20,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

Single male, located in Michigan. Currently work as a Firefighter and have experience in public service, transportation management, property management, and am a self taught home renovator. Hoping to collaborate on new business venture - open to explore many industries. Looking to serve day to day or as needed - silent partner is optional. Would prefer to be hands-on and have a mentor or someone willing to teach the ropes of the business.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

I'm a college educated insurance professional looking for alternative investment opportunities to the stock market. I'd like my involvement to be strictly silent. I work with a lot of business owners so I have firm grasp on start up costs, ROI, etc.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > Michigan

I was coached at a young age by my father, who owned several different companies. I learned the ins and outs of business growth and management and built a million-dollar company at age 22. Also had a successful career in corporate America. Would like to help entrepreneurs achieve similar results.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Michigan

38 year old female in the Title industry. I’m looking for investment opportunities to provide financial independence and security. I want to diversify my portfolio. I would like to be a silent partner or partner to learn more on investing.

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > Michigan

I have been an investment advisor for several years, I have also been involved in several different business ventures. I am looking to invest in different types of opportunities in Michigan. My background in Finance can offer some new businesses help in funding, and raising funds, as well as financial direction and advice.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

I am a 31-year-old professional with 8 years of operations support as a Health & Safety Manager. I am currently studying Finance as part of the Full-Time MBA Program at Michigan State University. I am a Michigan-native seeking to invest in a Michigan company. I am interested in limited partnerships as well as full partnerships which require strategy and operations support from me. I am looking to invest between $5k-$50,000 in a high-growth industry with realistic exit opportunities. Additionally, I have access to 60 acres of agricultural land which is available as part of my offering.

$5,000 to $50,000