Michigan Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Michigan Investors

United States > Michigan

I am a Michigan-based business owner and operator with 14+ years of experience in sales, customer service, operations, and team management. I previously owned and operated a wireless retail business and currently work in healthcare operations, where I help manage daily workflow, patient experience, staffing, reporting, billing support, and process improvements. I am interested in investing in strong, practical businesses with clear revenue potential, especially in service-based, healthcare, retail, home service, technology, logistics, and local growth opportunities. I bring more than just capital — I can offer hands-on business experience, sales strategy, operational support, marketing insight, customer acquisition ideas, and local Michigan market knowledge. I am looking for serious entrepreneurs with a clear plan, strong work ethic, and realistic growth goals. I am open to being either a hands- on investor, advisor, or strategic partner depending on the opportunity.

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

I am 52, married (24 years), 2 sons 22/17 yo, live in Southeast MI area. Director of Business Development for a regulatory compliance consulting company for the pharmaceutical medical device and biologics industry. 25+ years of successful business ownership operations sales marketing and business development. 2 advanced degrees in life sciences. Can be hands on or silent partner/investor depending on situation. Individual investor with others interested. Specifically interested in the medical marijuana industries i.e. grows, processors, dispensaries must have current license with a municipality and have application in process for State of Michigan. Must be working with an attorney with MMJ experience. Must have a location secured. Documented MMJ experience required i.e. caregiver, dispensary owner or other MMJ experience.

$25,000 to $200,000

United States > Michigan

I’m a retired Marine Corps officer currently in the airline industry looking to develop an investment portfolio as a silent partner and perhaps as an advisor.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

More than 10 years experience in deep learning and artificial intelligence applications for prognostics, diagnosis, and computer vision applications. Expert in education and teaching.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

I am a married 71-year-old retired male. I have spent 45 years running my own business and have invested with partners in various other business. I have been involved in real-estate investments, automotive repair, boat dealership, restaurant and home and business rentals. I am looking for an investment with minor involvement to keep me engaged during my retirement.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Michigan

My husband and I are in our mid 30s we are looking for an investment so he can run the company/business. I work for GM so I am secure in my role but want to have a business investment of our own.

$0 to $500,000

United States > Michigan

Individual investor. I currently work in supply chain & logistics within a manufacturing environment, and I've held a variety of other roles in purchasing and sales in the past. I also currently own a couple rental properties as well as a small residential cleaning business. I have a B.B.A. - Supply Chain and am currently enrolled in an M.B.A. program. I'm a young professional with the entrepreneurial looking for my next project. I'm open to being as involved as necessary and putting in some work, or a silent partner.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Michigan

A native of Michigan, my wife, two children and I have recently relocated to Michigan after many years in NYC. I currently work in television and fabrication seasonally in NYC, commuting about twenty weeks out of the year. I also have past experience in coop management, the arts, and home renovation and hold degrees in political science and the performing arts. I have previously and am currently invested in a few small real estate projects on the East Coast, but am looking to invest moving forward in a wider range of industries primarily in Michigan and my local area. An individual investor, I am interested in most any industry or venture, although obviously there are those which I would understand better than others given my experiences. Food production is also of high interest to me. At this point I am primarily looking for opportunities as a silent investor, but would entertain a more active role if there was a need and I could genuinely offer substantive support.

$1 to $150,000